Just putting up a few examples of roleplay that I had today. Like last time, please critique me so I can find ways to improve with Shark.

Now, the first post was from when I was roleplaying with Seal. In previous posts before, he had been flirting with her. (Like a fucking gentleman. I am proud to say Shark is not a rapist or nor does he force females into doing things like people have been assuming. >:I) Anyways... he is concluding the scene with giving her a bit of information on the plan he has in store, on which he expects her to carry out since she is the Elite Executioner.

The second is a few posts after the first, where SharkStar simply is just leading a patrol out to hunt.

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"Hmm..." -Single frontal lifted, weapons of the armed mitt glinting ominously in opposement to the dim cast of knifed light that shone into the Empire lair, reflected from the great silver orb, known as the 'moon', that now had its image mirrored in the precious waters that made up their sea. A pallid salmon tongue slipped out from amidst the parting rows of colorless, whiten incensors, dagger-like at their tips and proportions. Tongue began to cleanse the risen paw, speaking while engaging within the act of grooming.- "I am delighted to know you seem eager to cause havoc at my commands, though all you need to know right now is that you are to scar a target from a clan I have in mind... Keep them alive, directly telling them of the decree of war from Empire of the Rifted Seas.." -Callous and ambition now repleted the illuminate, saffron oculars of the Sovereign. Lifted pillar began to descend, destination to be upon the slabbed stone that floored beneath broad paws. Deadly, yet natural artillery scraped against the dull mineral below, robust limbs pulling the great blue beast to his supports.- "I feel as if I'd like to take a hunting trip... something I have not been able to do in a long time... I am sure you want to stay here and rest..." -Accented Irish tone drifted off, concluding after the momentary pause.- "It was a pleasure to meet you, Miss. It would be nice to speak again soon." -No longer did a smirk taint facial features, only a gentle smile. Flickering bottle brush furred tassel in dismiss, the 'God' bowed his skull to the beauty before reclining from the perch, into the sanded terrain below. The golden sediments beneath his pads shifted, looking across the flooring to pick out the decorative, colored shards that scattered about... then to the exit of the cavern, in which had been studded at the mouth with acute pillars.-

-The agile Sovereign emerged through the tropical brush, in which rustled behind him after parting the pathway of flowered greenery. Finally uncovering the hunting spot that was to be the destination of the patrol, ebony engulfed tailpiece arose in a silent signal for the participants to halt, golden glazed oculars encompassing the clearance before them. Tasting the salty atmosphere, no signs of danger were confirmed to lurk nearby, nothing irregular about the sight before the judging gaze of the 'God'. Raised tassel gave a flicker of dismiss, in message that the patrolling members could advance forwards and hunt, no words being spoken in order to keep the presence of the team of hunters erased from presence of their victims, not to scare any nearby game with unneeded ruckus. Gusting of midnight air whirling by, it stirred the rope accessory in which hung loosely around the nape of the Divine, incensors from the beasts of the seas that strung from the tough fabrics clattering together for moments before the silent winds surpassed masculine anatomy.-  

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In my opinion, I think I am getting better with adapting to my roleplay as Shark. :"D